If the officer wrote the incorrect location as to where i got pulled over is that grounds for getting a ticket dismissed?

The location of the stop is not relevant. The location where he first observed you is the location where the vehicle code violation, Driving Under Suspension occurred. Therefore, this would not result in a dismissal. As far as the legality of the stop: If the officer reasonably believed that your brake lights were not functioning properly, he did have probable cause to stop your vehicle. Thereafter, he had the right to confirm your identity. Although you could raise the issue of probable cause to stop as a means of suppressing evidence that followed thereafter, it is not likely to be successful. If this is a your 6th or subsequent DUS citation, you face a mandatory period of incarceration of 30 days. However, Dauphin County does permit house arrest. if this is a violation of Section 1543(b), there is a 60 day period of incarceration required. If this is a your first 1543(a) citation, many officers are willing to change the charge to 1501 (Driving without a license) to help you avoid additional suspension. Good luck.